Kiss of Death

by Singthesorrow   Aug 2, 2008


Heartbeats feel faster than seconds.
Breathing excels the limit.
Darkness surrounds you.
Dizziness overwhelms you.

Shadows won't stop spinning.
Lungs becoming heavy.
You give away to the Dark.

Collapse.
Broken.
Fallen.

Your eyes become a wall.
Breath upon your skin, a kiss upon your neck.
Sacred crimson venom, feeds another mind.

Your wings of gold have turned to stone.
Your bright eyes, burnt out.
Your glow now white as the ashes.

Embers burn deep within you.
Rage, thirst, and power takes a hold of you.

Familiar faces draw a blank.
Voices astray from your mind.
A kiss of death, another soul.
One more victim, who will know?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Dude love this poem a inner darkness that's coming in the heart love it keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Annaam

    Wow! This is a great poem. . . Dark, yes, but still very powerful!. . . . Good Job!

    5/5.
    Keep it up! 8).

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Bravo! this was fantastic. it was powerful and quite deep. you expressed yourself very well.

    Your wings of gold have turned to stone.
    Your bright eyes, burned out.
    Your glow now white as the ashes.

    those were my favorite lines. very creative. i love your writing technique, very unique. job well done again. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by ether

    This is good.
    Very good.

    How is it you are not on everyones favourites yet?

    Your descriptions and your words are very powerful, and they create perfect images in the readers mind which is what every poet should aim for.
    Kudos to you, great work. Absolutly nothing needs changing.
    5/5

    jess ~

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