This is so powerful and original, different from anything I've read before. I think that you expressed emotions on so refreshing, truly excellent way.

- It's all a mixture of

Don't.
Stop.
Leave me alone.
Not now.-
^^^
Very effective lines. They seem simple yet they hold really deep meaning.

I can relate to this piece in a way which made it even more powerful for me.

Overall, this is interesting, creative and greatly written.

Keep up!

Now this poem was fantastic and the words were very strong and true. We often love somebody so much it's hard to walk away even when we know we have to. Excellent job with this piece 5/5 GG23

Ahhh Jess. AMAZING.
Yep, I've fallen inlove with this piece. I can relate so closely and I know exactly what you're talking about. You went straight into it from the first line which cause my undivided attention straight away, and kept it the whole way through with catchy phrases and powerful words. I love love loveeee this line;
'Or maybe it's because I'm a sucker for trainwrecks and you're a f**king disaster.'
Sometimes swearing in a poem can ruin it, but you used this marvelously and it really put the emphasis on how you feel.
The short lines that came next were so strong and so relatable. And the next stanza, that sarcasm, it made me giggle. Then it went softer with the last few lines, which I liked.. to show that no matter how angry this person makes you, you just can't help but have a soft side for them. It's just so hard sometimes and you put that into words so well.
The last line.. perfection. It just sounds.. exhausted. I guess that's the way I'd describe it.
A really supurb poem. Definatley a favourite of mine. Well done, my dear. (:

xo

Ahhh Jess. AMAZING.
Yep, I've fallen inlove with this piece. I can relate so closely and I know exactly what you're talking about. You went straight into it from the first line which cause my undivided attention straight away, and kept it the whole way through with catchy phrases and powerful words. I love love loveeee this line;
'Or maybe it's because I'm a sucker for trainwrecks and you're a f**king disaster.'
Sometimes swearing in a poem can ruin it, but you used this marvelously and it really put the emphasis on how you feel.
The short lines that came next were so strong and so relatable. And the next stanza, that sarcasm, it made me giggle. Then it went softer with the last few lines, which I liked.. to show that no matter how angry this person makes you, you just can't help but have a soft side for them. It's just so hard sometimes and you put that into words so well.
The last line.. perfection. It just sounds.. exhausted. I guess that's the way I'd describe it.
A really supurb poem. Definatley a favourite of mine. Well done, my dear. (:

xo

This poem was amazing because you could clearly tell how you were feeling as you were writing it. The emotions were so clear in this poem. Soo clear. Hmm, honestly there's nothing I would change with this poem. I know your poems aren't exactly like poem format, or poetic.. but this one was basically just writing how you felt on paper. Which was excellent. It's a good way to release your emotions and what you are feeling. Very well doneee. 5/5 (:

Pure emotion my dear, Very soothing, truthful read... I loved it! 5/5

Sincerely,
Elizabeth

I loved this poem. you really have got such a unique style of writing. It is absolutely stunning, your words in this poem were perfect, they were so powerful. I could really relate to you. take care and keep it up, 5/5

Oh boy could I relate. Sometimes we can't help who we fall for. You try to so hard to hate them because you know theyre no good for you but everytime you hear their name or smell their scent, your whole body quivers and you yearn to be with them. I could feel each emotion you expressed because it deeply related with what I've been through. You use of syntax was flawless and you revealed your true feelings through both short lines and long lines without disrupting the flow. I feel like I know you on a personal level because I could tell this poem came straight from the heart. Very well said.

"Or maybe it's because I'm a sucker for trainwrecks."
^Loved it! It basically summed up the whole poem for me and made it complete.

That last three lines blew me away leaving me breathless. I got the sense of a tired girl who cant understand why shes fallen for him but wishes she didnt. Sometimes you shouldnt analyzing things because whats meant to be always has a way of coming back and working out.

Well done.
I really enjoyed this read.
*5/5*

First of all wow! the emotion is extreme on this one. you didn't even have to put bad words on this poem to get your point accross, although that still gave the poem an even greater impact!

"You are selfish, you are blind and you are ignorant."
>this line alone proves what i said above...simply full of emotion..
"And I've been thinking, trying to figure out why that's okay."
>you tell it girl!

"Maybe it's the way you laugh or smile
That smile that makes the receiver feels like a king,"
>like the way you relate the proudness of the second person to a reciever..in the word "feels" it should be "feel"
"Maybe it's your scent, and the way that no one smells sweeter"
>nice description. your word choice is wonderful.
"Or maybe it's because I'm a sucker for trainwrecks and you're a f**ing disaster."
>aren't we all? i can totally understand the whole eotion of this line. and i like that way you didn't hesitate to throw in a cuss word to get your emotion going.

It's all a mixture of

Don't.
Stop.
Leave me alone.
Not now.
>wow and it hurts like hell being told that..
keep it up!
"In short this is a 'thanks for taking interest',
With a large serve of sarcasm on the side."
>nice line! again love the bluntness!
"Though, in the end it is just as well;
I don't want to fall in love with you all over again."
>i can see you're trying to keep the love emotion down..and that you want to just act like love sucks, but those are the effects of a broken heart..

But who am I to deny the way each of my nerves tingle?
Whenever someone mentions your name, I can't help it.
But oh, how I've tried.
>and like i said we try and try to let that person go. let ourselves heal, but the wounds will always open no matter how much they want to heal...and only by looking at that person we love so much...

Hopefully what i wrote on this comment made sense.. i can relate to your words and keep fighting is all i can say!
over all an amzing poem, but then again you are a very talented poet!

**Ada**
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