I would say a great one !!
just break it into stanzas it i s not good to read somthing 1 block ,

the rhyming is wonderfull good job

Wow. This was excellent. The only thing i would say is like above, break it into the stanzas. But apart from that this poem was really well written. Flowed very well and your rhyme scheme was brilliant. Very enjoyable read and its added to my favs. Nice work. 5/5