SL i'm not really sure if I like this poem but it certainly gets your message across. You are still young and you have so much in front of you, time is a great healer and there are many males waiting out there who need someone like you who knows how to express themselves. Yet men are wary of clingy women, they get claustrophobic, just be natural and you will find life will follow you flow. Smile and be happy take care from a friend and an old man Ray. But don' sto[ using your feeling in your poems, 4/5

This poem had a lot of emotion to it... and I love that in poetry. Just try to be more poetic, I felt this poem was too casual. But that doesn't stop it from being amazing. I loved the read! The flow and word usage were very good in this one... 5/5