Yesterday, today, tomorrow

by LiveLoveLearnDie   Aug 2, 2008


This worlds deep dark core,
how can you feel no remorse,
this culture feeds this hate
these streets seal my fate,

how is it that you have no heart,
you're tearing this world apart.
my children,
what kind of world are they
to live in.....

when will we realise,
we are to be our own demise.
power, wealth at what cost,
is it that all our morals are lost.

forgotten memories of happiness.
my mind worried by these times
as my hope fades
it's up to me to change my ways.

This worlds deep dark core,
how can you feel no remorse,
this culture feeds this hate
these streets seal my fate.

but time can change,
it starts with you

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  • 15 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    I like this poem. i agree that the flow is actually a little off but the message makes up for it. i think this poem has real potential if you tweak it a little :) but 5/5 for now anyways cause its still really good.

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This flows so well, and its true. I liked this poem alot. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by claire

    I like the possitive part of your message, but the poem's mostly really pessimistic, and you don't really say why, or what you think is so evil . . . and the ends a little cliche. i'm not gonna vote on this one, cause I can't really give it a four or a five. overall, i would recomend staying away from cliche's and generalizations

  • 16 years ago

    by haileyy

    I love this. it is so true. i love how it just all flows. beautiful!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Well...
    See... the theme is very good. Very thought provoking. I personally like this concept.
    You've given it a good try to explain. Somewhat it's good. But what lacks in your piece is few grammatical mistakes. That is making the poem less interesting. You should edit this one.

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