by january friend Aug 2, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Something I do not understand |
by Marc Ortiz
Well a long poem again. I think to improve this you should work on the structure of the poem. Also try to refrain from using a lot of I's in the poem coz it sometimes messes up the flow. |
by Montse
The white spray from the sea hides my tears, but |
by Montse
The white spray from the sea hides my tears, but |