Wow that was really powerful!!!!!! i loved it! it showed true emotion, of how you feel sad and/or upset. and painting a smile (so to speak) so nobody can see whats wrong. 5/5

Whoa ;) I like it!

Wow it was so beautiful and powerful it showed true emotion and WOW you really explained how everyone feels at times i think we all feel a little fake and that we must hide our true emotions. it was short and simple yet it was an EXPLOSION of emotions it was incredable!! i didnt want to end keep up the amazing work!! xxxxxxx 5/5

Short but really good :P

wanna read mine?
kiwi

Beautiful..really..keep writing..i liked it

Short and simple yet there are so many emotions running threw it, the meaning is amazing i love it and its going in my fav! keep it up! xxx 5/5

Very emotional nice i really like it very relatable