Bleedin' truth... (The Original Version)

by Moon   Aug 2, 2008


Looking at this beautiful face
Seeing the pain through your eyes
Everyone sees you laughing and joking
I see you crying blood inside
Your soul is screaming SOS
Through the darkness in your heart
Are wandering murdered secrets
Your fear, keeps me knocking with no answer
cause you're shivering and too weak 2 stand up on ur knees
Too many thieves are hiding in the silence
Trying to steel away your secrets
This makes you afraid opening your heart for the world
Your guardian angels are whispering
While the ghosts of mercy are yelling which unabled you hearing them
Even silence could cut you and leave you bleeding
Thru da loneliness in you're eyes are running empty tears

" Now are demons on my mind
Am tortured by the unknown
Darkness has taken me away
Pain locked me up in chains
Hope has left me behind
Fear became my biggest enemy
The only thing that left for me was a painful truth
Am struggling in this metal chains
Shadows on my mind
Locked up in a golden cage too many thoughts are runnin through my head
Unestablished dreams that are growing which makes it hard for me to breath
Because theres no space left in this cage
I dont believe in fairytales, but will I ever be free?
Am lost inside this labyrinth and the last light of hope in my heart began to turn off...
And am buried under your spell
My dreams are yelling out loud
No one is here to hear my silent scream
Although deep inside I know that one day i will fly away with the wings of an eagel
Ill be strong with the shield of a fighter
I will hunt my nightmares like a hunter in the night
And dont you dare to beg please no, because its too late and I will strike back
The heart of a hero beats inside of me
The war lords are still alive in my veins and they wont give up till am free
1 day I will erase "

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    I think Moucha as a point for some poems but not for this one. I like the long stanzas they explain alot. Well written with many powerful lines and words. :) 5/5, Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Ok dear, let me beguin to say
    waht i will tell you today

    to write a poem you should these rules follow
    to make it good and not a hollow

    frist dont make a big paraghraph inside
    it is hard to see waht the meaning reside

    break it up to simple light 4 tones line
    and she will look much better and fine

    and more you should rhym some more
    rhyming is somthing we all adore

    you can epxress your feeling well ,
    you are talented behind this shell

    i am expecting to read from you more
    can't wait to read that why we are here for !!
    :)
    *i hope you dont mind my orogin and accept my comment *

  • 16 years ago

    by Moon

    GuYzzz... Please rate my poem .. n tell me wht u think about it....