Comments : You, my Strength

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Such a cute poem ^_^

    i liked how you pieced the sentances together, and connected things to him.

    this was the best part "You're my drive, my fuel, That sets off my fire" << that was perfect. how it was set was just so good.

    love the poem 5/5 =]

    ~tia

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Cute and sweet and flowed well and was just so brilliantly worded, aww, i loved it