This is really good!

I loved it.

5/5
:]

Very cute! I enjoyed it thoroughly.. =+) Rob

You're way beyond your years, btw.. keep it up!

I love it!

"Day after day
We struggle even more
I'm just tired of the tears
And all of the pain I just have to ignore"

"You say one thing
Then don't even hold up to it
All your broken promises
..I'm so tired of this shit"

^ can totally relate ^

"One day your telling me you love me
& promising our forever
The next you wont even talk to me
You never want to spend time together"

^ This has happened to me, just one to many times. and I know it sucks so bad ^

"I do it all
I always let everything go
I figure if I just pretend
All the bad wont ever show"

^ I love the flow of this stanza, really good ^

"And well right now I cant lose you in life
I need you more now than ever
So lets just play pretend
and make this last forever

Lets just pretend
you love me like you say
lets just pretend
everything is okay

Maybe then we could make it
Not a lie ever spoken
To Just Play pretend
is the road that should be chosen"

^ The heart of the poem, and it just sings (if you don't mind me saying) ^

"Lets pretend your in love with me
Lets just say you always kept your word
Lets just pretend..
That your my everything and your my world"

^ I've been there, had to pretend just to make it through ^

"Come on ill teach you how
Just fake it till the end
Come on baby..its easy
lets just play pretend.... "

^ But it's just hurting you in the end, pretending, acting, faking it ^

Sorry it's such a long comment, but I feel like I wanted to put a comment on every stanza, lol !

I feel the exact same way, I can totally relate to every line!

5/5

EmoBritboo

=D