by Sean Allen Jun 3, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
love is
It's kind of like yelling at a Rock and Roll Show, |
by vanessarrr
that's really creative and cute. i liked it the way it was. made me smile. take care:) <---(see the smile?) |
i think it was a fine length, sometimes short but sweet gets the message across, and in this case it does. great job! |
It is a nice poem. But i felt you should have written more... Its looks as if you just told something in a hurry...... But the style is good. |
by East Poetry
very cool and origanal. your full of origanality good work sean. I look forward to more of your poems |
by Sean Allen
Ah well, I kinda felt like that was what I wanted to say, so that is all I wrote! |