Bad boy [for contest]

by XxShadowxOfxYourxShadowxXMyxMiNdxIsxFrOzEnxX   Aug 2, 2008


Oh my god,just look at the way that he walks..
Look at his lips while he talks..
You just can't stay so cool when he passes by..
Your heart melts when he gives you a smile..

Oh my god,when he walks around..
You just can't make a sound..
With his eyes he gives you a sign..
He kiss you and he blows off your mind..

Oh my god,that boy's so bad..
As he takes you by the hand you're already dead..
Touch of his skin,his breath on your neck..
His dirty dance and eyes so black..

Oh my god,he is so perfect,he makes you feel joy..
So bad and naughty boy..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mummy to a beautiful baby girl

    OMG tis poem rox... i <3 it so much

    and i no exactly wat ur talking bout cuz i av a bad boi 2. lolz

    keep writting.

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Lol great poem,
    i think every gurl knows a guy lik this...
    i sure do lol XD
    5/5
    good write
    :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Ash

    Hey well done on coming 3rd and Such al Great poem well done and keep it up x)

  • 16 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    The idea behind this poem is really good. i don't think i've read a poem yet about this topic. the only suggestion i have is to proof read it again and make sure there are no spelling mistakes. but overall, great idea and you should definitely continue writing.

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