The idea behind this poem is really good. i don't think i've read a poem yet about this topic. the only suggestion i have is to proof read it again and make sure there are no spelling mistakes. but overall, great idea and you should definitely continue writing.

Hey well done on coming 3rd and Such al Great poem well done and keep it up x)

Lol great poem,
i think every gurl knows a guy lik this...
i sure do lol XD
5/5
good write
:D

OMG tis poem rox... i <3 it so much

and i no exactly wat ur talking bout cuz i av a bad boi 2. lolz

keep writting.