by April Aug 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You may be just a friend |
by Andrew
Ohhh, this is really sweet, brilliant all the way. Some of your sentences nearly meant the same thing so i guess you should modify one.. Like when you said .... Get my attention then again in the next sentence said kept my attention.. I think you should check on that. Generally, nice poem. |
by Maddy
Great poem |
Love it... good job. =] |