Sweetest Sin [collab]

by CourtneyyContageous   Aug 3, 2008


Pinning you up against the wall,
As our lips intertwine.
Standing before me was heaven,
This angel was all mine.

She was hesitant at first,
But slowly started caving in.
This man standing before her,
Was her sweetest taste of sin.

He places one finger on her lips,
"I know you want this too,
There's no denying love,
What you feel inside is true."

Pressing her body against his
Her hands begin to shake
This is it, no turning back
A Feeling she'll never be able to fake.

Thoughts racing through both minds,
Overwhelmed by this feeling from within.
A gentle kiss as they go upstairs,
Love was the sweetest sin.

Another collab with HvN =)
He's a great collab partner =)

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  • 16 years ago

    by dirtyhands

    Calp* calp* calp*
    this is great!
    its cool!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Pinning you up against the wall,
    As our lips intertwine.
    Standing before me was heaven,
    This angel was all mine

    ^^^^When you read this the scene is set!
    A very hot poem by you two, the sparks just flew right off the screen!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid
    ps: Thank you so much for nominating my poem:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Such a beautiful write. You both did a very wonderful job coming up with such a beautiful atmosphere and this poem also had some good imagery as well. :] Keep it up. Great job by the both of you.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JD

    This was great :D
    the only thing that kindof confused me that it went from being like, "I"
    to being like "She" and "He"
    Otherwise the imagery was AMAZING.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very sensual poem with great imagery flow and rhyme scheme

    nothing to critisize here

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