I really loved this, you expressed your emotions well, and I like how you put in the end, that you're not alone......Great work, well expressed. Keep writing, always and forever.........

I like how this poem is so heart-wrenching at the beginning, but towards the end there was hope. That you will love again, and someday the pain will subside.

Trying to hold on to a happy memory.
`` "on to" should be "onto". :]

Empty eyes reflect the sadness,
Once mirrored by long lost tears.
`` These were really powerful words, and that they were by themselves just made them more powerful and made them stand out more.

That I am not alone.
`` I ADORE this as the last line. It gives hope to everyone who has had a broken heart.

Great job!

Keep writing!

..|CAYYCE|..

I agree with Imaginary Heart, the begining isnt as good as it could be.

4/5

Not bad, but not the best.
It just needs to flow better, other than that, good job.

Wow, that was really good. I liked the irreuglar flow pattern, it made it unique. Keep it up. Shanik

That was great, i really liked it, great job!! 7/5

Good poetry. The flow was great and the imagery strong. I found it easy to follow, and some of the lines really stood out, and made an impact on the poem and the reader.
Great writing.

Sole x

Wow! I liked this a lot. The stanzas were...unusual. I'm not used to a poem not really rhyming, but I do like how it all came together.

But yea. Good job, and keep it up!

Yeah love can bring us the highest highs and the lowest lows thats for sure. Heartache always teaches us life lessons and makes us stronger though. Great work 5/5 GG23

Very emotional and thought provoking. Loved the imagery and overall poem was superb.

Well written and I enjoyed reading this its certainly heart felt and I feel the emotion being portrayed I found the flow was a little off in the second stanza but except for this its very good.

I loved the hope at the end. We have all experianced a broken heart that has left us shattered and alone wanting love but if we keep faith in our hearts that we will find the one to glue back the pieces of our heart then everything will be okay in the end. You made a flawless transtition from the sadness to hope and overall this was a great piece. Well done. *5/5*

Wow this poem is very strong, great work!
The flow is brilliant and each word provokes emotions! Your a talented writter, i really enjoyed reading this poem! Brilliant job =]

Well I have experience this solitude of losing the one you love. I know it's very painful but you'll be alright don't worry.

Anyway some lines don't flow very well. Try to remove some of the commas :)

Anyway good job on writing this poem. I can feel the emotions coming from you. Keep it up.

Wow.. you're words are simple, but so powerful...

i love how you write, great job!

i'm glad how you were talking about the sadness and giving up, then in the end the happiness comes back, and there is hope.

5/5

keep up the good work :]

This poem is simple and well written. You expressed the main idea of the subject, which is one many can relate to, in simple words and simple structure. The rhyming were fine, and the choosing of words made it easy to imagine. Nice job 5/5

Cause ur not alone. everything willl be ok. loneliness only can last soo long and then ull fins someone

Great poem. The imagery was good

Empty eyes reflect the sadness,
Once mirrored by long lost tears.

I love these lines they are so powerful
great write 5/5

I definitely like this poem more. You were more creative and used better words. I definitly got a picture in my mind while I was reading it.

Empty eyes reflect the sadness,
Once mirrored by long lost tears.
-- I really loved those two lines.

Great job.

Cayce

Good job again. The flow though wasn't the best but it wasn't bad. The imagery was good and the emotion was outstanding once again. Great job. The poem was really good honestly .