Let me just hit you,
just once.
Hard enough so the
blood starts pouring.
And I can watch
the crimson liquid
running down
your body.
Spilling to the floor.
watch you turn white,
your steps get clumsy.
Watch you fall.
Fall to the ground.
watch as the color
drains from your body.
Feel your body become limp.
I put my ear to your chest
and hear your heart still.
I really, really, like this.
I love how you described the emotions without acctually Describing them.... okay I hoped that made sense.
But I do really love this.
5/5
