I'll Save You From the Burning Bridges

by Lesslovedthanloathed   Aug 3, 2008


Hey darling, this bridge is burning
We both knew this day would come
We've got to move on now,
Now that the sparks have nearly gone.

Hey honey, this bridge is falling
If you jump I promise I'll catch you
We should get going with our lives now,
Now that this chapter is finished.

Hey sweetheart, this love is ending
If you say you need me I'll stay a little longer
Close your eyes and leap now,
Now that you need to make your choice

Blindly choose me, lover, dearly
This love has still warm breath.
Its your call now dial,
Denial! Who's it going to be?

Will it be he that broke you
That played you
Or I that loved you
That saved you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I thought the use of honey, sweetheart and darling was too much, its just too mushy for me but i thought it was good though the flow was a litte off at places

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Again the rhyming was on off, I think if you wrote a rhyming poem it would be great.

    The ending was short and sweet and really finsihed the poem of well.

    Good job

    Alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Fake Facade

    Wow.
    i like this poem.
    pretty good. :D
    5/5

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