My Rebel of a Lover

by Lesslovedthanloathed   Aug 3, 2008


You're like a cork in my clockwork
You lead me astray
Hey lover, I think we're going the wrong way
You're a breaker of rules
And I know what you're thinking

Lover, it's true I love the sensation
The thrill of rebelling, the wind on my face
You've turned good girls bad
One after another
But lover, you're mine now

Love, it's like a phenomenon
This joy ride has got me wanting more.
You're my addiction baby,
My ecstasy, my drug - my poison.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxMizz DistructionxX

    This was good.
    i really liked how you wrote this.
    Its different but in a good way.
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I like the way you use the word Lover in this poem as a kind of pronoun, it's pretty unusual and gives a sence of power to the poem enforcing the words to be stronger,

    Good job

    Alex xx

  • 16 years ago

    by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby

    Beautifully written!
    i felt as if it could've flowed better, but other than that great poem!
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Annaam

    Hmm.... it's good... :)

    'Lover, it's true I love the sensation
    The thrill of rebelling, the wind on my face
    You've turned good girls bad
    One after another
    But lover, your mine now'
    --- In the last line, it should be you'RE... not your... :).

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