Hmm.... it's good... :)

'Lover, it's true I love the sensation
The thrill of rebelling, the wind on my face
You've turned good girls bad
One after another
But lover, your mine now'
--- In the last line, it should be you'RE... not your... :).

Beautifully written!
i felt as if it could've flowed better, but other than that great poem!
xx

I like the way you use the word Lover in this poem as a kind of pronoun, it's pretty unusual and gives a sence of power to the poem enforcing the words to be stronger,

Good job

Alex xx

This was good.
i really liked how you wrote this.
Its different but in a good way.
=]