Earth (cinq-cinquin colab with TJ Becker)

by Maddy   Aug 3, 2008


The sky
Dotted with Clouds
Blue, Grey, nighttime Navy
Home of thunder storms and lightning
Sunset

Desert
Winds swirling sand
Making dunes piled so high
Home for the many small creatures
Hot sun

Vast sea
Fast rippling waves
Pacific, Atlantic
Home to multiple sea creatures
Oceans

Water
Falls of liquid
Moon casting its shadow
A diamond sparkle in its glow
Dark fell

Valleys
So deep and wide
Often lush and green grass
Fertile farmland; pastures and fields
Warm breeze

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Grant Gilbert ( F P C ) at 2008-08-04

    Very clever write TJ And Maddy,very descriptive with vivid imagery, clever structure too good choice.Well done both of you

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A wonderful collab, the structure and style is very cool. Beautiful imagery and this was a pleasure to read. Great work, keep writing, always and forever...

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    What a beautiful image you have painted for the reader. This was a delight to read, it seems you two are a good team. flow and structure was perfect.

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