What a beautiful image you have painted for the reader. This was a delight to read, it seems you two are a good team. flow and structure was perfect.

A wonderful collab, the structure and style is very cool. Beautiful imagery and this was a pleasure to read. Great work, keep writing, always and forever...

Grant Gilbert ( F P C ) at 2008-08-04

Very clever write TJ And Maddy,very descriptive with vivid imagery, clever structure too good choice.Well done both of you

Grant