Comments : Heaven Midst this Heath

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    'Loving the moments of obliviousness
    Floating in broken nights
    As light streams through the cracks
    Hurting photo phobic sights'
    Well... if at the age of thirteen you can write these lines then I have to say you have a great poetic future ahead! Fantastic lines to describe feelings. I admire your work. Good! keep writing!