by H E Losey Aug 3, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Wake up America |
Hmm, you can add more to this one. You've got the potential, I know you do. Just keep expanding on the topics and you should have a masterpiece by no time. Good start though. |
Not one of my favorites, but this one is pretty good. I think you could of expanded it a bit more, but stiill, this was a good one. Keep writing, always and forever... |