Dad#1
by H E Losey Aug 3, 2008
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A boy has many heroes |
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16 years ago
This was short but definatly a touching little write. The little rhyme you had going was good. I know you can always add more to these though.. I think you have the potential to do it. Good job though.. 5/5
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16 years ago
Great rhyme and wording, you have created a short but touching piece of poetry. Great work. Keep writing, always and forever...
