by BloodyBrokenAngel Aug 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I love you so much |
I loved it! |
by Hollymariee
Way too many rhymes with the word you . This can be easily changed though . Good overall idea , such a sad subject . Your flow was decent too . Good job on this one , 4/5 |
by coolaziz
Good poem keep writing |