All the way in

by Michael D Nalley   Aug 3, 2008


We didn't let Him all the way in
Therefore we were living in sin
If we would had lived in Him everyday
We would have been loved in every way

The sad story is so very old
Of how a soul can be sold
We have heard where it begins
With our parent's original sins

Since I am your faithful friend
I will tell you where it will end
With the truth in life, come what may
When we let our Savior in all the way

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Very meaningful and powerful poem filled with power. The truth behind your words truly shined through with each line and I could relate with what you were saying. The flow was good and overall this was a great piece. Short but filled with meaning. Well done. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    It was very short, but held so much truth. I think people who aren't saved are missing out on a lot [especially since they won't be going to heaven. >.>] even in everyday life. My relationship with God is very powerful, and I talk to him allll the time. I know He loves me, and that alone gets me through some really hard stuff.

    I loved this.

    Well done. :]

    Keep writing!

    .||CAYYCE||.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a good poem with a certain message. Enjoyable and some point to think about it. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Quite honestly, this piece was really good. I found no mistakes. Although I don't see the point in capitolizing his.. I know you may have done that to emphisize [sp?] it. Other than that, I thought this was a wonderful write. It had a consistant rhyme. Great write. 5/5.

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