Quite honestly, this piece was really good. I found no mistakes. Although I don't see the point in capitolizing his.. I know you may have done that to emphisize [sp?] it. Other than that, I thought this was a wonderful write. It had a consistant rhyme. Great write. 5/5.

It's a good poem with a certain message. Enjoyable and some point to think about it. :)

It was very short, but held so much truth. I think people who aren't saved are missing out on a lot [especially since they won't be going to heaven. >.>] even in everyday life. My relationship with God is very powerful, and I talk to him allll the time. I know He loves me, and that alone gets me through some really hard stuff.

I loved this.

Well done. :]

Keep writing!

.||CAYYCE||.

Very meaningful and powerful poem filled with power. The truth behind your words truly shined through with each line and I could relate with what you were saying. The flow was good and overall this was a great piece. Short but filled with meaning. Well done. *5/5*