YikYak ( F C D ) at 2004-05-20

Ah Ha.... Your very good at the sappy love poems. Matter a fact, Your pretty good at everything you do. Is this poem written for me? Because you know, with me, Is where you belong, lol. I'm in a goofy mood. But this poem was great. I knew you had it in you!! You make mamma proud, lol

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brokenheart ( F C ) at 2004-05-21

well well well what have we here
a happy poem
well i never thourt i'd see the day
but my god is it good,
you say you find it hard it don't seem that way reading this
i truley believe you have a unique and rare talent and i hope you you'll put aside a copy of you're book when you get around to publishing you're fantastic work
you're extreamly good at what you do
you're a fantastic person who only desearces the best in life and i'm sure you'll get it
i applause you hayley yet again i have to give you a 5 if i could vote a thousand times i would
never stop you'r brilliant writeing you will be famous
all my love
you'r mate lol
lorna
xxxx

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PaulsGothGirl ( C ) at 2004-05-21

ZHey hayley great poem.High 5 for you!hehe your such an inspirational person and poetry writer.I enjoy reading all of your work.Great job hayley.Plz continue to post new poems!Xx!

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Chris Georgiou ® ( F C ) at 2004-05-22

WOOOOOW Hayley!! This is so awesome! I can definately relate. I absolutely adored all the descriptions that you used and the entire poem flowed so sweetly. You Hayley are such an inspiration to me, and I will say it over and over again, you're a phenomenal writer! Who ever this guy is in your life should consider him self extremely lucky to have such a wonderful and beautiful girl like you in his life. Thank you so much for sharing your exquisite masterpieces with us my dear friend. Take care! Love Chris.

sorry had to move them from other name lol

i love it! keep writing =]

Wow thanks for your comments guys, as always they mean the world to me and brighten up my day!

I am in awe here my girl, I wish I had written this, I shoulda, coulda woulda, but alas, I did not...lol This poem really knocked me out!!! You re the cream of the coffee here, Love ya, Tim

Hey there Hayley. Thanks for taking the time to read my poems, lol. You didn't have to but I appreciate you taking the time to do so.
Wonderful work as usual. You write with great emotions which make your poems truly meaningful. I commend you for your hard work. Keep it up...your poetry will take you far =)
Take care always!
Lovelots, Kristina

aw great poem! keep it up

Wow, you did really good and its soo adorable! Keep up the good, no not good, awesome work!
~laurel

great poem :) its nice to read soem happy poems from u hun :P... yea im in kinda a bad mood cuz someone ranked all mine 1/5... but thats okie this brightened up my day a little bit :) lol love ya.. ttyl

-Tyler-