by The Angel of Secrets Aug 3, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I am frozen in time, a slave to the cold, |
Very nicely written... the flow and rhyming were great! The word choice was very good as well... But I what I liked about this poem the most, is how it was written... It just had so many great lines that had a lot of meaning to them. Very good write! 5/5 |
by Nobodys Hero
The rhyming flow on this poem is really good and given its length it seems as thouth youv'e spent quite a while on it, really great job this poem is very well written =] |
by Kitty
Amazing. This poem really got to me and i am definetly adding it to my favorites |