Comments : Slave of Cold

  • 16 years ago

    by Kitty

    Amazing. This poem really got to me and i am definetly adding it to my favorites

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    The rhyming flow on this poem is really good and given its length it seems as thouth youv'e spent quite a while on it, really great job this poem is very well written =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very nicely written... the flow and rhyming were great! The word choice was very good as well... But I what I liked about this poem the most, is how it was written... It just had so many great lines that had a lot of meaning to them. Very good write! 5/5