I really like this one and i can't find anything to citique you on. That's a good thing right?
Aken Sol

P.S. Good job on getting that award :P

that was a great piece , i read it again to try to suck everything you were saying in. good job. I have noticed that you have had alot of time invested into written poetry and reading and crituqueing others poems. it would be my honor if you would read my poems and let me know what you think of them. i look forward to your comments. On to your other poems

thank you for helping me,
I'm not so good at english..
I'm glad you like my poem.
I really like yours to..

hugs and kisses

great poem. i can't wait to read more.

im impessed with your english, you are a very good critic. thx for noticing the mistakes in my poem THE ANSWER, i have changed most of the errors you pointed out. with and exception to a few. like i kept "is what" rather than change it to "was What" the tense might be hair of, but i dont like the alliteration there. so i chose is. im also very very impessed that you noticed that my poem was a axiom. you surely no your sh#t. good work, ive rated and commented on this poem allready. I just wanted to thank you for the good critique. your friend Randy

I like this poem. Some people suffer life, when they should be enjoying it.
Great work.

Beautifully written poem. Lotz of imagination.. And you can find a lot inner meaning.. Really a good work. 5/5 for this

Awesome write sean:)

"Charts and graphs
Of the stars at night,
Quantitative meaning
To dazzling sight.
What are we doing?"...very cool stanza, and I also like how the following stanza answers ties into it.