Rainy end of love

by Goodbye   Aug 4, 2008


End of the cold night
you wish that I fade away
No star shine for us

The world is broken
tears are shouting pain inside
rain washes off hate

This night is the end
years of suffering are over
battlefield has stop

Die away my love
wipe off my anger
kiss my lips and go

Walk outside to rain
kiss away my memories
let me forget you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loverinpeace

    I like this one very much because i can relate, i know what this kind of pain is and u wish for what is said in this poem. it hurts very much to let that person go but sometimes u have to.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    I love it

  • 16 years ago

    by CHEMICALcaitlin

    I liked how your words were simple, but they made sense. I felt a lot of emotions, too. Everything flowed very well, and I loved the ending. So, I thought you did a really good job. 5/5

    Caitlin =]

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    So simple yet it says so much. A beautiful piece of work!

    The whole thing fits so perfectly, nice job!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Good write... I think you maintained a 5,7,5 syllable count :) good job...
    touching piece...

    keep writing

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