Lost soul

by LadzOfSoul   Aug 4, 2008


She's crying, rushing outside that door
She have no idea from where to go
Her mind crowded with pain and lies
Her heart broke into a million parts
While her soul is nowhere to be found

Running, walking, crying
This road seems forever to take
She can't find any light ahead
Anywhere she turns were just filled with darkness
Every inch of her crushed down with every step she make

She fell on her knees
While tears and sweat drops on her face
She feels like giving up
Why can't he just take her life away?
Maybe it will end up the pain

Last chance to take
Last chance to make
This might will soon give up
My mind starts to stop
And my heart starts to crash.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    WOW! This is such an amazing poem. So intense and sad at the same time. I love the way you started the entire poem. It led the reader straight into your feelings...

    Excellent! 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Sad and broken poem... once again a lot emotions you've displayed here. liked it!