Love could not make a mark on this.

by Eliza   Aug 4, 2008


I never did feel anything at all.
but i just wanted you to know.
i love you more then i ever could before.

you showed me the sun and the sky and the stars.
i never felt pain in your lucky arms.
i kissed your lips a faithful plea.

i left my wounds undone to bleed.
you'll never hear me.
you'll never plead.

just for me and me alone.
i dont want to shine.
i just want to be shown.

I love you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I dotn want to shien , i want to be shown

    mme nicely put their ,

    btu i disagree with you ,

    you need to shine , to your man , to see you , adn you must glow , in his eyes, liek a pearly treasure ,

    dont undersestimate this ,

    sturcture wise , i think ,
    you have a great poem
    but need more little wor on the rhyming and it would be wonderfull

    good one

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