Caring Is An Unbreakable Bond

by timmy   Aug 4, 2008


All the words you spout out consumed my fragile heart

Shattering my voice and bringing tears to my eyes

Knowing the truth was like a sharp needle stabbing through

All the scars and bandages ripped apart bleeding deep inside

But the words you spoke after to comfort our bonding ties

Truly cured my life in such a way that I'll never be the same

The moment I knew you cared was the moment I flew up,

Into the bright shining sky...

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Thanks Taylor. <3 I'll always be your valentine...

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    All the words you spout out consumed my fragile heart

    ^^ I really like this as an opening line. it's blunt and just...states how you feel about her. and it puts it very well.

    Shattering my voice and bringing tears to my eyes

    ^^ "Shattering my voice" <--- gorgeous. i really loved that little bit. most people don't write that way. shattering's a great verb. ^.^

    Knowing the truth was like a sharp needle stabbing through

    ^^ Gawd. that line is just...it's how i feel often about tay...idk. it's just a friendship thing. december...*shudders*

    great job, timmy. it clearly touched her and i thought it was very very sweet. <3

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