All the words you spout out consumed my fragile heart

^^ I really like this as an opening line. it's blunt and just...states how you feel about her. and it puts it very well.

Shattering my voice and bringing tears to my eyes

^^ "Shattering my voice" <--- gorgeous. i really loved that little bit. most people don't write that way. shattering's a great verb. ^.^

Knowing the truth was like a sharp needle stabbing through

^^ Gawd. that line is just...it's how i feel often about tay...idk. it's just a friendship thing. december...*shudders*

great job, timmy. it clearly touched her and i thought it was very very sweet. <3