Sweet suicide

:) wow short but yummy my style also haha

This is a strong poem,but dude keep your head up and stay strong,dont let the worries of the world bring you down,I was once in your position of wanting to commit suicide but thank God he brought me to life and to my right senses.5/5 keep it up,stay strong

VERY EMOTIONAL POEM AND SAD HOPE THIS ISN'T ABOUT YOU GREAT POEM THOUGH

"ill me play your game"

That's WRONG!!!!

So many choices
The pills or the blade
Oh, either way would be ok

I like this line, It's different from the others.

Oh, Sweet suicide
Let me play your game

omg, I love this line, so simple but so powerful.

Ill do as you say
Slit my wrists right through the vein

I can just picture it.

Oh, sweet suicide
ill me play your game

again I love this line.

the only thing is that you need to put comas and/or periods, but other than that I love it, good job.