Wow...
amazing poem
5/5
i loved the flow
many poeple can surely relate...
including me
ive thought this way many times
(:
great write

-halie

p.s thanks for the comment

Great poem. BUT you play to WIN..... :)

Great poem i know alot of people can relate ive tried both methods you mentioned and then some only to have every method fail and my brother succede idk i guess all i can say is no one gets out of this life alive so make this one life the one you never want to leave its hard i know but it might work no garantees if there were it wouldnt be life write hehe well great poem ttyl

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It was a wonderful poem and so touching as well, but sis you have to be strong and face ur fears coz life is like the boogyman if you fear it it will kill u and death is not gonna get u outta this.If u need help we r here 4 u.:)...

keep it up.5\5.

Really good poem but dont do it!!!!! if u go i go!!! well b ok!!! i promise!!!

So many choices
The pills or the blade
Oh, either way would be ok

I like this line, It's different from the others.

Oh, Sweet suicide
Let me play your game

omg, I love this line, so simple but so powerful.

Ill do as you say
Slit my wrists right through the vein

I can just picture it.

Oh, sweet suicide
ill me play your game

again I love this line.

the only thing is that you need to put comas and/or periods, but other than that I love it, good job.

"ill me play your game"

That's WRONG!!!!

VERY EMOTIONAL POEM AND SAD HOPE THIS ISN'T ABOUT YOU GREAT POEM THOUGH

This is a strong poem,but dude keep your head up and stay strong,dont let the worries of the world bring you down,I was once in your position of wanting to commit suicide but thank God he brought me to life and to my right senses.5/5 keep it up,stay strong

:) wow short but yummy my style also haha