5/5
That was an awesome poem! I loved the structure, it was unique and yet felt so easy and natural to read. Some of the lines stood out as great, most stood out as amazing!! I really loved these two:

'We will live like a thirsty person in an ocean,
This is exactly how it turns, no love no life, no motion!'

I thought they were so perfect, and again the reference to the angel without, then with it's wings. What a great write. Beautiful :)

Sole x