When emotions soar

by Amber   Aug 4, 2008


How do emotions bubble up?
Does it occur when your
eyes first meet his leaving you
begging to see him more?

Or does it happen when you
first touch his gentle skin?
Feeling the smoothness of
him makes you think you win.

The more you and him touch,
the more you want him to touch
you to give you a feeling of safeness
that you can always clutch.

Pretty soon the touch of safeness
turns to a kiss from him. Leaving
you begging for more, praying that
he is not deceiving.

Kiss after kiss made you feel safer.
Made you want him more. Made
you love struck wanting to bring it
to the next level with his aid.

Soon though your wish came true.
You find yourself laying with him in
bed his arms laying across your
chest, once again you win.

Emotions soar during the first look,
touch or kiss and then his charms
kick in with you in the bed, forever
his, in his safe arms.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    This poem was just okay for me.
    I can get where your coming from but there were errors i saw
    one:
    turns to a kiss from him. Leaving
    you should have started leaving on a new line
    two: There wasn't a lot of raw emotion for me
    three: vocabulary could be stronger adding in a few spicy words really brings something to a poem
    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very cute poem exploring romantic desires as well as emotions
    I enjoyed reading this

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Amber right??.....well love this poem I'll add this in my fav. keep up the wonderful work (^_^) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tangible heartache

    Wow Amber, that was really good. I loved it ^.^ keep it up

    xD 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    So beautiful :]

    i'm speechless