Comments : To Be With You

  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    "I seen your smile
    I heard your laugh
    Embraced the voice
    Of my other half"

    My favorite line. The beautiful simplicity in this stanza was a perfect way of describing the soulmate. I think this poem can even be turned into a song. :) 5/5 hugs

  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    "I'm dreamt of spending every second
    Just embracing your brilliance
    It breathed me a reason"

    lol forgot to add these awesome lines. they almost made me cry as i envisioned the power love can exume.

  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    Oopss...that's exhume. lol sorry. from your profile i can see your probably not the only crazy one here. hahaha.