Comments : Craving your soft touch and warm breath (collab with temps)

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was really fun to write with you. I think we both had fun writing it because it was the kind of thing we don't usualy normally write ourselves. But it was fun. :] Good job with your stanzas.. they fit well with the poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Hey i really liked this for your first explicit poem!! I loved it great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Valentine

    Good work

  • 16 years ago

    by angela cisneros

    Wow i love this poem it great

  • 16 years ago

    by angela cisneros

    Wow i love this poem it great