You should know by now i despise reading these types of poems...specifically while i'm listening to dashboard confessional...anyway

And you layed there sleeping

^^ Layed should be Lie. Just trust me. My Langlit teacher shoved that down my throat..."chickens lay eggs, people lie down". mhmm.

good poem.
it's sweet and just...i don't like reading these kinds. but i do. :P

5/5

I have to say really enjoyed reading this poem. It portrays deep feelings for someone and the flow was there. =) keep up the good work