Comments : Scratch The Surface

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey BC thats a nice write with good flow and rhyme. And yes life is to short.

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You did a wonderful job on this poem, because you made it your own. The way you worded things were pretty original in my opinion. It was a great poem because it had such a clear message that is so true.. and it had a awesome flow and rhyme as well. It was short and to the point. Well written. 5/5