Yes, it IS ok... :)
Nice work...I always love a poem that asks lots of questions...somehow makes it more effective.
Take care,
Ignoris

Uhm , i would have to disagree, well , it si ok to gay but i am nto completly for it sorry my opignion ,

i sjtu dotn like it , i feel liek ti si unatural thing ,

well not meant to hurt somone but that is my opignion !

:)

and yes it can result some diases

:)

mmin all
i did not feel ti was writen liek a poem sructure ,
so i wont vote ti now !

soo ,
i hope you PM me when you work more on it !!

That was my first poem i put up here... and i didnt think about the format i just typed it.