Comments : Venus Star

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sammy!

    My sweet friend!
    So nice to see you posting again:)
    I love the whole concept of the stars and all..
    I am sure you will find your supernova, sweetheart. One day she will walk into your life and boom! Sammy will lose his heart.

    Love always,

    XXXIngrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam...you have penned such sadness entertwined with beauty here.

    A transcending light
    Illuminating eternity
    Passion and delight
    Consuming a tranquil night

    Love can light up our lives with it's brillance. Great imagery and word choices.

    I've been waiting my whole life
    For a smile to take me this high
    Loosing the sense of gravity
    Elevated so far off the ground

    Isn't it amazing what a smile from someone we love can do to us. Turns your world upside down.

    Hoping for an opportunity
    To sway in your atmosphere
    Shockwaves from a supernova
    Form as two galaxies may collide

    One day when you least expect it.....it will hit you out of no where.

    Floating clouds of wonder
    In a nebular of elements
    Fears the morning mist
    Will soon fade out my Venus star

    The dream lover that disappears with the morning.

    Great write!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    'Floating clouds of wonder
    In a nebular of elements
    Fears the morning mist
    Will soon fade out my Venus star'

    just wonderful! what a imagery and expression! the whole poem is written very creatively! i liked the lines you've constructed. wonderful poem!