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by Ingrid
Sammy! My sweet friend! So nice to see you posting again:) I love the whole concept of the stars and all.. I am sure you will find your supernova, sweetheart. One day she will walk into your life and boom! Sammy will lose his heart. Love always, XXXIngrid
by Cindy
Sam...you have penned such sadness entertwined with beauty here. A transcending light Illuminating eternity Passion and delight Consuming a tranquil night Love can light up our lives with it's brillance. Great imagery and word choices. I've been waiting my whole life For a smile to take me this high Loosing the sense of gravity Elevated so far off the ground Isn't it amazing what a smile from someone we love can do to us. Turns your world upside down. Hoping for an opportunity To sway in your atmosphere Shockwaves from a supernova Form as two galaxies may collide One day when you least expect it.....it will hit you out of no where. Floating clouds of wonder In a nebular of elements Fears the morning mist Will soon fade out my Venus star The dream lover that disappears with the morning. Great write! Love Cindy
by Aryaan
'Floating clouds of wonder In a nebular of elements Fears the morning mist Will soon fade out my Venus star' just wonderful! what a imagery and expression! the whole poem is written very creatively! i liked the lines you've constructed. wonderful poem!