All you are to me now, if a sick guy who needs a bullet to the head,

you have wrote if a sick guy instead of is a sick guy x

this poem was really good. that first line is very powerful and it draws you into the rest of them poem. the feelings you have of wanting the guy to be dead is normal. and he doesnt really deserve you to forgive him in my opinion.

i really liekd this one, well done x