Well Crystal your poem honestly left me with a tear in my eye, firstly because no one has ever done anything like this for me, and secondly just thinking about how MY country is treated by the very people who inhabit it breaks my heart. Im not going to say anything about how the poem was written there is no way i could possibly be objective.
thank you so much my friend

Crystal this is a beautifully written poem for a well deserving man who stands tall for all he believes in....5/5...Jim

Yet another amaizing write, you have more talent than u realise i love our use of imagery, the wounderful way you have descibed the landscape and emotions. you dedicate so manny of ur poems to others, its very pleasant to see. 5*

Waw!! I honestly loved the way you portrayed the scene. you gave such amazing description for example :
"Flowers of every color the purples and the gold's
Giving pleasure to the eye it's beauty to behold"
these where two of my favorite lines in your poem. :) And also the rest of the poem was marvelous too mwah xxxxx
Much love , Roxy