Love at a distance

by emma   Aug 5, 2008


Love is a risk most people take,
As most people think their heart will break,
But I'm trusting you with my heart,
Because i believe we will never part.

A kiss of your lips will b a dream come true,
I always smile when you say i love you,
Your my first love and my last,
I'm looking to wards the future and forgetting
the past.

You have changed me in every way,
Your on my mind everyday,
I talk about you 24/7,
Your an angel sent from heaven.

To my boyfriend Aaron IL always love you <3

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Awwww....this is a really cute poem. Just some thoughts:

    "A kiss of your lips will b a dream come true,"

    "b" should be "be".

    "I'm looking to wards the future and forgetting
    the past."

    "to wards" should be "towards"

    But otherwise, this was very sweet and heartfelt. Keep writing, always and forever...